Showing posts with label Sentence A day. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Sentence A day. Show all posts

Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Sentence A day 10

I will post this every Wednesday. Each time it will have 7 more sentences than the last time. (I will write a sentence a day and show you every Wednesday) Also every once in a while I will edit the story. You may also find that I only put 6 sentences or 5 or 4 but I really put 7. (the other sentences are in the middle that means you are going to have to reread the story every time in order to catch up on the little things I added.)


My name is Robert James. I'm 12 years old. It is true that my eye colors change. One day it it blue the next it is brown sometimes it is even red. But the thing is it changes upon my mood. When I'm angry they are red, when I'm sad they are blue. Also when I'm enraged they are yellow. There are a few others also. Every day I have a routine. 1.Wake up. 2.Write down what mood I'm in (my eye color) is. 3.Eat breakfast........ it goes on and on. It all started with, actually what should be my first daily routine because I have it most every night. It is have a freaky dream (or what I call freaky). My dream actually happened in real life. It starts of by my dad saying "On a night much like this" in his nice soothing voice (of course he didn't say this in real life). From that point on he didn't talk in the dream. My dad and I were walking on the sidewalk back home, and of course it was night time just like my dad said in the dream. My dad has whiskers, is about 6 foot 2, and of average strength and speed. His hair was brown and eyes a nice deep blue color. His name was William. My dad being a nice dad let me lead as I was an adventurous 6 year old. As we were walking home we came upon a crosswalk (like we always do). After we checked both ways we started walking across the crosswalk. Suddenly a car appeared speeding down the road at lightening speed. My dad like the dad he is pulled me back but during the process sending him forward. He disappeared with the car along the road. The sad thing is his body was never found. But the strangest thing happened in my dream. This time instead of him saving me he did something very weird. Yes, guessed it but probably not all of it. Instead of him saving me he didn't do anything. Actually he pushed me into the car, but strangely enough while he pushed me in he acted  as if he saved me and him, and in a way he did. (Chapter 2??? maybe but i don't think so) I appeared inside a cave. Right next to me was what looked like a baby dragon. I was scared and astonished as would you be if you were in my situation. Suddenly the baby dragon disappeared. I ran outside to what looked sort of like a zoo. But instead of tigers and lions there was dragons, griffons and other creatures. The next thing I knew at least 50 soldiers came and seized me then through me in jail. The soldiers had steel armor on holding spears and had a symbol on there shield. (this picture would be in the book)


 





 It was dimly lit in the room with men slouching on walls with a rubber band on their wrist which I also now have on. I fell over on a wall and fainted of exhaustion.

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      "About six years ago to this day I saw a person that looked just like you" I explained to the kid, trying to sound as friendly as possible. Earlier the kid I'm talking to drop into the jail cell. He seemed awfully familiar. Then I remembered about six years ago someone who looked just like him but older got thrown in here. He some how escaped on his own, so when this kid dropped in I wasn't going to let the opportunity pass by, I was going to use him to get out. When people started mocking him that is when I struck. I broke up the fight and started becoming friends with him, I learned that his name is Robert and he learned that my name is Chase. Now, I explained my plan to get out of the jail, I think he was taking a liking to it, he seemed to get excited at the idea of exploring this new world he found. Now, what he didn't know was that I was just going to fly away right when we got out. I was actually going to fly is the thing. I'm blind, meaning I can control air. Now you may be thinking how I could know that Robert and the man looked similar. Well, the thing is I didn't, I used the air to feel his face. And I noticed that this face and the other face felt a lot alike.____ I taught him that the rubber bands basically drain your eye color leaving you with no power. I noticed that he has blue eyes. This means he has water bending powers, sad, water bending power are not common and he is going to lose that. Of course this doesn't work on blind people because we have no eye color. The rubber band just makes it so I can't use my powers when it's on. Naturally I don't tell the kid because he would probably figure out that I'm just going to betray him and run. No, I'm not betraying him, I'm just trying to get out and he is the only way to do it.

Wednesday, February 6, 2013

Sentence A day 8

I will post this every Wednesday. Each time it will have 7 more sentences than the last time. (I will write a sentence a day and show you every Wednesday) Also every once in a while I will edit the story. You may also find that I only put 6 sentences or 5 or 4 but I really put 7. (the other sentences are in the middle that means you are going to have to reread the story every time in order to catch up on the little things I added.)


My name is Robert James. I'm 12 years old. It is true that my eye colors change. One day it it blue the next it is brown sometimes it is even red. But the thing is it changes upon my mood. When I'm angry they are red, when I'm sad they are blue. Also when I'm enraged they are yellow. There are a few others also. Every day I have a routine. 1.Wake up. 2.Write down what mood I'm in (my eye color) is. 3.Eat breakfast........ it goes on and on. It all started with, actually what should be my first daily routine because I have it most every night. It is have a freaky dream (or what I call freaky). My dream actually happened in real life. It starts of by my dad saying "On a night much like this" in his nice soothing voice (of course he didn't say this in real life). From that point on he didn't talk in the dream. My dad and I were walking on the sidewalk back home, and of course it was night time just like my dad said in the dream. My dad has whiskers, is about 6 foot 2, and of average strength and speed. His hair was brown and eyes a nice deep blue color. His name was William. My dad being a nice dad let me lead as I was an adventurous 6 year old. As we were walking home we came upon a crosswalk (like we always do). After we checked both ways we started walking across the crosswalk. Suddenly a car appeared speeding down the road at lightening speed. My dad like the dad he is pulled me back but during the process sending him forward. He disappeared with the car along the road. The sad thing is his body was never found. But the strangest thing happened in my dream. This time instead of him saving me he did something very weird. Yes, guessed it but probably not all of it. Instead of him saving me he didn't do anything. Actually he pushed me into the car, but strangely enough while he pushed me in he acted  as if he saved me and him, and in a way he did. (Chapter 2??? maybe but i don't think so) I appeared inside a cave. Right next to me was what looked like a baby dragon. I was scared and astonished as would you be if you were in my situation. Suddenly the baby dragon disappeared. I ran outside to what looked sort of like a zoo. But instead of tigers and lions there was dragons, griffons and other creatures. The next thing I knew at least 50 soldiers came and seized me then through me in jail. The soldiers had steel armor on holding spears and had a symbol on there shield. (this picture would be in the book)


 





 It was dimly lit in the room with men slouching on walls with a rubber band on their wrist which I also now have on. I fell over on a wall and fainted of exhaustion.

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      "About six years ago to this day I saw a person that looked just like you" I said to the kid, trying to sound as friendly as possible. Earlier the kid I'm talking to drop into the jail cell. He seemed awfully familiar. Then I remembered about six years ago someone who looked just like him but older got thrown in here. He some how escaped on his own, so when this kid dropped in I wasn't going to let the opportunity pass by, I was going to use him to get out. When people started mocking him that is when I struck. I broke up the fight and started becoming friends with him, I learned that his name is Robert and he learned that my name is chase.

Wednesday, January 30, 2013

Sentence A day 7 (continued) (kinda)

I did not add anything but I have a question. Should he be a good guy and help or be a bad guy? (I might not follow your suggestions)



I will post this every Wednesday. Each time it will have 7 more sentences than the last time. (I will write a sentence a day and show you every Wednesday) Also every once in a while I will edit the story. You may also find that I only put 6 sentences or 5 or 4 but I really put 7. (the other sentences are in the middle that means you are going to have to reread the story every time in order to catch up on the little things I added.)


My name is Robert James. I'm 12 years old. It is true that my eye colors change. One day it it blue the next it is brown sometimes it is even red. But the thing is it changes upon my mood. When I'm angry they are red, when I'm sad they are blue. Also when I'm enraged they are yellow. There are a few others also. Every day I have a routine. 1.Wake up. 2.Write down what mood I'm in (my eye color) is. 3.Eat breakfast........ it goes on and on. It all started with, actually what should be my first daily routine because I have it most every night. It is have a freaky dream (or what I call freaky). My dream actually happened in real life. It starts of by my dad saying "On a night much like this" in his nice soothing voice (of course he didn't say this in real life). From that point on he didn't talk in the dream. My dad and I were walking on the sidewalk back home, and of course it was night time just like my dad said in the dream. My dad has whiskers, is about 6 foot 2, and of average strength and speed. His hair was brown and eyes a nice deep blue color. His name was William. My dad being a nice dad let me lead as I was an adventurous 6 year old. As we were walking home we came upon a crosswalk (like we always do). After we checked both ways we started walking across the crosswalk. Suddenly a car appeared speeding down the road at lightening speed. My dad like the dad he is pulled me back but during the process sending him forward. He disappeared with the car along the road. The sad thing is his body was never found. But the strangest thing happened in my dream. This time instead of him saving me he did something very weird. Yes, guessed it but probably not all of it. Instead of him saving me he didn't do anything. Actually he pushed me into the car, but strangely enough while he pushed me in he acted  as if he saved me and him, and in a way he did. (Chapter 2??? maybe but i don't think so) I appeared inside a cave. Right next to me was what looked like a baby dragon. I was scared and astonished as would you be if you were in my situation. Suddenly the baby dragon disappeared. I ran outside to what looked sort of like a zoo. The next thing I knew at least 50 soldiers came and seized me then through me in jail. The soldiers had steel armor on holding spears and had a symbol on there shield. (this picture would be in the book)


 





 It was dimly lit in the room with men slouching on walls with a rubber band on their wrist which I also now have on. I fell over on a wall and fainted.

Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Sentence a day 7

I will post this every Wednesday. Each time it will have 7 more sentences than the last time. (I will write a sentence a day and show you every Wednesday) Also every once in a while I will edit the story. You may also find that I only put 6 sentences or 5 or 4 but I really put 7. (the other sentences are in the middle that means you are going to have to reread the story every time in order to catch up on the little things I added.)


My name is Robert James. I'm 12 years old. It is true that my eye colors change. One day it it blue the next it is brown sometimes it is even red. But the thing is it changes upon my mood. When I'm angry they are red, when I'm sad they are blue. Also when I'm enraged they are yellow. There are a few others also. Every day I have a routine. 1.Wake up. 2.Write down what mood I'm in (my eye color) is. 3.Eat breakfast........ it goes on and on. It all started with, actually what should be my first daily routine because I have it most every night. It is have a freaky dream (or what I call freaky). My dream actually happened in real life. It starts of by my dad saying "On a night much like this" in his nice soothing voice (of course he didn't say this in real life). From that point on he didn't talk in the dream. My dad and I were walking on the sidewalk back home, and of course it was night time just like my dad said in the dream. My dad has whiskers, is about 6 foot 2, and of average strength and speed. His hair was brown and eyes a nice deep blue color. His name was William. My dad being a nice dad let me lead as I was an adventurous 6 year old. As we were walking home we came upon a crosswalk (like we always do). After we checked both ways we started walking across the crosswalk. Suddenly a car appeared speeding down the road at lightening speed. My dad like the dad he is pulled me back but during the process sending him forward. He disappeared with the car along the road. The sad thing is his body was never found. But the strangest thing happened in my dream. This time instead of him saving me he did something very weird. Yes, guessed it but probably not all of it. Instead of him saving me he didn't do anything. Actually he pushed me into the car, but strangely enough while he pushed me in he acted  as if he saved me and him, and in a way he did. (Chapter 2??? maybe but i don't think so) I appeared inside a cave. Right next to me was what looked like a baby dragon. I was scared and astonished as would you be if you were in my situation. Suddenly the baby dragon disappeared. I ran outside to what looked sort of like a zoo. The next thing I knew at least 50 soldiers came and seized me then through me in jail. The soldiers had steel armor on holding spears and had a symbol on there shield. (this picture would be in the book)


 





 It was dimly lit in the room with men slouching on walls with a rubber band on their wrist which I also now have on. I fell over on a wall and fainted.

P.S. I added some sentences at the beginning. Also pictures count as a sentence.

Wednesday, December 19, 2012

Sentence A day 6

I will post this every Wednesday. Each time it will have 7 more sentences than the last time. (I will write a sentence a day and show you every Wednesday) Also every once in a while I will edit the story. You may also find that I only put 6 sentences or 5 or 4 but I really put 7. (the other sentences are in the middle that means you are going to have to reread the story every time in order to catch up on the little things I added.)


My name is Robert James. I'm 12 years old. It is true that my eye colors change. One day it it blue the next it is brown sometimes it is even red. Every day I have a routine. 1.Wake up. 2.Write down what my eye color is. 3.Eat breakfast........ it goes on and on. It all started with, actually what should be my first daily routine because I have it most every night. It is have a freaky dream (or what I call freaky). My dream actually happened in real life. It starts of by my dad saying "On a night much like this" in his nice soothing voice (of course he didn't say this in real life). From that point on he didn't talk in the dream. My dad and I were walking on the sidewalk back home, and of course during night time just like my dad said in the dream. My dad had whiskers, was about 6 foot 2, and of average strength and speed. His hair was brown and eyes a nice deep blue color. His name was William. My dad being a nice dad let me lead as I was an adventurous 6 year old. As we were walking home we came upon a crosswalk (like we always do). After we checked both ways we started walking across the crosswalk. Suddenly a car appeared speeding down the road. My dad like the dad he is pulled me back but during the process sending him forward. He dispersed with the car along the road. The sad thing is his body was never found. But the strangest thing happened in my dream. This time instead of him saving me he did something very weird. Yes, guessed it but probably not all of it. Instead of him saving me he didn't do anything. Actually he pushed me into the car, but strangely enough while he pushed me in he acted  as if he saved me and him, and in a way he did. I appeared inside a cave. Right next to me was what looked like a baby dragon. I was scared and astonished as would you be if you were in my situation. Suddenly the baby dragon disappeared. I ran outside to what looked sort of like a zoo. The next thing I knew soldiers were came and seized me then through me in jail. It was dimly lit in the room with men slouching on walls with a rubber band on their wrist which I also now have on.

P.S. From now on at the bottom of the writing will say if I posted any sentences in the middle or corrected any thing. This way you won't have to read the whole thing every time. (By the way no sentences are in the middle nor is any thing corrected)

Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Sentence A day 5

I will post this every Wednesday. Each time it will have 7 more sentences than the last time. (I will write a sentence a day and show you every Wednesday) Also every once in a while I will edit the story. You may also find that I only put 6 sentences or 5 or 4 but I really put 7. (the other sentences are in the middle that means you are going to have to reread the story every time in order to catch up on the little things I added.)



My name is Robert James. I'm 12 years old. It is true that my eye colors change. One day it it blue the next it is brown sometimes it is even red. Every day I have a routine. 1.Wake up. 2.Write down what my eye color is. 3.Eat breakfast........ it goes on and on. It all started with, actually what should be my first daily routine because I have it most every night. It is have a freaky dream (or what I call freaky). My dream actually happened in real life. It starts of by my dad saying "On a night much like this" in his nice soothing voice (of course he didn't say this in real life). From that point on he didn't talk in the dream. My dad and I were walking on the sidewalk back home, and of course during night time just like my dad said in the dream. My dad had whiskers, was about 6 foot 2, and of average strength and speed. His hair was brown and eyes a nice deep blue color. His name was William. My dad being a nice dad let me lead as I was an adventurous 6 year old. As we were walking home we came upon a crosswalk (like we always do). After we checked both ways we started walking across the crosswalk. Suddenly a car appeared speeding down the road. My dad like the dad he is pulled me back but during the process sending him forward. He dispersed with the car along the road. The sad thing is his body was never found. But the strangest thing happened in my dream. This time instead of him saving me he did something very weird. Yes, guessed it but probably not all of it. Instead of him saving me he didn't do anything. Actually he pushed me into the car, but strangely enough while he pushed me in he acted  as if he saved me and him, and in a way he did.


P.S. Like my cliff hanger? I am going to try to put cliff hangers at the end of the 7 sentences.

Wednesday, December 5, 2012

Sentence A day 3 and 4

Sorry I did something weird so if your trying to catch up on this post just wait till weds.

Wednesday, November 21, 2012

Sentence A day 2

I will post this every Wednesday. Each time it will have 7 more sentences than the last time. (I will write a sentence a day and show you every Wednesday) Also every once in a while I will edit the story.



My name is Robert James. I'm 12 years old. It is true that my eye colors change. One day it it blue the next it is brown. Every day I have a routine. 1.Wake up. 2.Write down what my eye color is. 3.Eat breakfast........ it goes on and on.

Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Sentence A day

I will post this every Wednesday. Each time it will have 7 more sentences than the last time. (I will write a sentence a day and show you every Wednesday) P.S. Today I will only post one sentence.



My name is Robert James.

Tuesday, October 30, 2012

Writing Advice: Sentence a day

A good way to write a book is to do a sentence a day. Unless of course your like me and just have to get your ideas all out at once. This also helps if you don't know what to write about. you just jot down a sentence a day and slowly but surely build your book. Just say "Oh! Now I want my main character to do this." This way you don't have to pressure your self to write a whole bunch. Later on when you got more used to writing you can drop this pattern.