Under The Bed

Going under my BED!

A true story by ALEXANDER THEODORE PERAZZO                       

   

    One day Thomas, Joseph and Ben came to my house. We did not know what to play. We were thinking in the family room until I said, “Follow me.”  All of us went to my room and Joseph went under my bed!  So Thomas, Ben and I tried to pull him out but he was too heavy.  “Mmmmmm,” said Joseph thoughtfully, “this is a game and inside of  here there are aliens that suck you in and make you faint.”  So I got sucked in too. So Ben and Thomas tried to pull me out. They got me out a little bit but the aliens were stronger. But Thomas and Ben tried harder. So they got me out! So than us three tried and tried to get Joseph out! But it was to hard!! Because he is very heavy very heavy!!!!!!! (No offense Joseph(added 4-14-13))










After thoughts: Good story thinking that I was a 6, 7, 8 year old. I didn't fix any of the errors so that it still has oldness feel if you know what I mean.

Writing Advice: Sentence a day

A good way to write a book is to do a sentence a day. Unless of course your like me and just have to get your ideas all out at once. This also helps if you don't know what to write about. you just jot down a sentence a day and slowly but surely build your book. Just say "Oh! Now I want my main character to do this." This way you don't have to pressure your self to write a whole bunch. Later on when you got more used to writing you can drop this pattern.